tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28238816.post1893527450293426014..comments2024-02-24T11:28:02.310+00:00Comments on Poetry in Progress: Marion McCreadyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04657757253873577465noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28238816.post-89897011217576400222012-10-05T13:44:37.011+01:002012-10-05T13:44:37.011+01:00okay, good points, thanks!okay, good points, thanks!Marion McCreadyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04657757253873577465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28238816.post-72558118583854915542012-10-04T14:22:17.008+01:002012-10-04T14:22:17.008+01:00I like the idea of this one. It’s hard to read I f...I like the idea of this one. It’s hard to read I find. I want it to have a more regular rhythm. I stumble each time I get to the single line. The whole thing has the feel of a nursery rhyme. Try turning it into one if only as an exercise; you might be surprised by the result. The title, although fun, feels too long. I make no pretence of getting it I’m afraid.<br /><br>Jim Murdochhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12786388638146471193noreply@blogger.com