tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28238816.post8309269047948253925..comments2024-02-24T11:28:02.310+00:00Comments on Poetry in Progress: Marion McCreadyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04657757253873577465noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28238816.post-67177681303349696972011-01-20T14:23:56.628+00:002011-01-20T14:23:56.628+00:00ahh, thanks jim!ahh, thanks jim!Marion McCreadyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04657757253873577465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28238816.post-18937013055378953002011-01-20T11:43:08.320+00:002011-01-20T11:43:08.320+00:00We like short. Short is good. Not a bad wee piece....We like short. Short is good. Not a bad wee piece. I think all you need to do to sort out the tenses is change ‘had’ to ‘have’ in the opening line. I’ve read it over several times now and that change works for me.<br /><br>Jim Murdochhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12786388638146471193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28238816.post-46106845328135686462011-01-20T11:20:24.304+00:002011-01-20T11:20:24.304+00:00thanks :)
the tenses aren't quite right, still...thanks :)<br />the tenses aren't quite right, still trying to sort that out!Marion McCreadyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04657757253873577465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-28238816.post-84522950522900074432011-01-20T08:29:23.831+00:002011-01-20T08:29:23.831+00:00Good work.
xGood work.<br />xRachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11803852725693518924noreply@blogger.com