Friday, February 10, 2012

Untitled short poem
first draft

the snow hill rises    
(poem removed)

2 comments:

Roxana said...

i love this one most, it is perfect, it seems to be a kind of ritual song, a litany, a prayer turned into song... hypnotic -

the second one too, it might make a lovely series with the first one, and how i like its ending... they are so simple, and yet full of mystery and they leave so many paths of reverie open...

(i agree with swiss about 'cardiac arrest', i didn't like that ending either)

Marion McCready said...

thankyou :) on with the experimenting...