Tuesday, July 19, 2011

First draft - if any of it looks familiar it's because parts of it are recycled from an old poem that that never really worked out.


(post removed)

4 comments:

swiss said...

i find i don't like the whisky rain (maybe it's because i don't like whisky!) so that kind of undermines it for me. i do like all the parentheses tho

Marion McCready said...

lol, I'm not a whisky person myself though a wee drop in irn-bru or a hot toddy both go down well enough!

Titus said...

Got to be amphetamine hills! Have you been to Wicker Man?
I liked whisky rain though. God, is that too many stimulants/depressants?

Marion McCready said...

LoL, no I've never been, quite a big thing now isn't it?!