What can I do but praise your first attempt? (though the diction may be over-rich in places). By the way, I think you need "lovers" to make the verb agree. Good effort!CE
Thanks ce, it means a lot coming from someone so adept at form! I've now changed it to lovers, thanks for pointing that out.
nice one! i'm rubbish at these
thankyou!
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What can I do but praise your first attempt? (though the diction may be over-rich in places). By the way, I think you need "lovers" to make the verb agree. Good effort!
CE
Thanks ce, it means a lot coming from someone so adept at form! I've now changed it to lovers, thanks for pointing that out.
nice one! i'm rubbish at these
thankyou!
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