nice one! i'm unsureof 'stacked in shocks' but i like'scythed, raked'. slides off the tongue. and i like the humour
actually, now that i've read it out loud, i'm appreciating its metricality
thankyou, I'm glad you like it!
This is great, sorlil, a real triumph. Fine use of alliteration & some memorable imagery - 'left to rot for art’s sake', 'hills / bandaged with snow'.
Thanks very much Dick!
Nothing more to add. Good poem.
Thanks honest man, I appreciate it!
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