Wednesday, April 09, 2008

NaPoWriMo 9
A pitiful offering today but it's all I had time for.

Haiku (supposed to be anyway!)

Damp city streets

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5 comments:

swiss said...

i don't know - through paving cracks is the kind of syntax i like

Dave King said...

It may be all you had time for, but it shows up my efforts. I am becoming a real fan. Well done.

Sorlil said...

thanks swiss and dave, I don't think they show up your efforts at all.

anhaga said...

All these are nice. I like the third best. Or, at least, it seems to me the most Japanese of the bunch -- looking from one thing to the other, with the "haiku moment" of a sudden in between....

Sorlil said...

thanks James, you know more about the form than me!