Thursday, April 03, 2008

NaPoWriMo 3

Spring Snow

The hills are deep in snow.
My upturned hands have memorised

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Tommaso Gervasutti said...

Very neat and precise. Crystal-clear.
I feel very close to this.
Best wishes, Davide Trame

Tommaso Gervasutti said...

Oh, I read "The Spirit Level" at least ten times.
"The Gravel Walks" is one of the greatest works I have ever come across.
I even made a lesson on it in the Italian school where I teach.
"The honest worth".
It "soundtests and sandblasts..."
Words that penetrate to the innermost layers.....
Best wishes, Davide Trame

swiss said...

isn't it the fourth today? time's getting short!

Sorlil said...

thankyou Davide, I'm glad you like it. I haven't looked at The Spirit Level for years though it's sitting on my shelf, you mentioning it has put me in the mood for picking it up again!

swiss, today's is a very last minute one I'm afraid, don't hold your breath for it!