Saturday, April 05, 2008

NaPoWriMo 5

A found poem from here.


Living off the Wreck
MV AKKA, 1956

Come, swim along her corridors
with cabins leading off.

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4 comments:

Dave King said...

You undersell yourself: not found there, created from there! Very adroit - in the best sense.

Sorlil said...

thanks dave!

Queen of Romance said...

This is good stuff, in particular considering the limited time element.

Do these NaPoWriMo poems have to be 'finished'? I'm working on a long poem every day this month, instead of individual poems, but most of what I've done so far is in note form, just lines sketched out or suggested, rather than finished pieces.

Jane (Holland) x

P.S. Sorry to be using my Charlotte Lamb blog address; was posting there earlier and couldn't be bothered to log in and out.

Sorlil said...

thanks jane, I think they only have to be finished in the sense of a decent first draft. Good for you with the long poem, can't believe it's only day six argh!!