last two lines? belters!
There's a lot of water about in your poems. Is that intentional or coincidence? Are you waving or drowning..?
thankyou swiss!!not so much intentional more like I can't keep it out! years ago when I started writing i thought I'd never be able to write a poem without the moon making an appearence, I guess some things are just lingering in the unconscious!
also I live next the the Firth of Clyde, and since StAnza my mind's been full of images of St Andrews and the North Sea so a lot of these poems have really come from a mash of both places!
Well, keep your wellies on! Or at least have a snorkel to hand...
I'm in agreement with swiss - belters!
thanks honest man, I'm glad you like it!
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