In a bid to catch up I've cheated slightly and reworked some of my old discarded poems to see if I can get anything worth keeping out of them.
NaPoWriMo 15
Cappadocia
Your homes are carved
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NaPoWriMO 16
Chance Meeting
I dreamt we would meet
by the Danube at night.
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3 comments:
Loved the first poem particularly - sounded like some sort of market. Lots of colour etc.
All the best
Amber
you don't write love poetry often, but i love it when you do, it is so delicate and fresh. the only line that doesn't resonate in me is the moon like a clock face. the rest is exquisite.
thanks amber, I'm glad you like it, yes it was very much market-like.
hi roxana, thankyou, that's a great help, when I've held onto a piece for so long it's hard to see what bits need to be chopped.
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