Friday, April 03, 2009

NaPoWriMo 3

She rises from the beach

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10 comments:

Frances said...

I love "Her grip is a prayer for wilderness." You do have a great talent for evoking the human imprint on the landscape.

Sorlil said...

thankyou frances, that's lovely of you to say so :)

James Owens said...

I love "the ivy baskets shiver / and swing, emptying / their dead arms into the wind." You have such a feel for the music of words and the shapes they make in the mouth. All of this is beautiful, mysterious and powerful. If you can do something like this every day....

Sorlil said...

thankyou james, I'm glad you like it though it may be all down hill from here, lol!

swiss said...

'drink from her skin'. liking that and the sort of forced (but worked for me) imagery between the asters and the ivy

Sorlil said...

thanks swiss.

Roxana said...

very beautiful... the plant images are so well woven together. and there is a subtle eroticism all over.

Sorlil said...

thanks roxana, this one was part based on one of your pics!

Roxana said...

ha! which one??? i'm more than happy!!!!

Sorlil said...

the third one of your 14th of March pics