Saturday, April 04, 2009

NaPoWriMo 4

At night I listen
to their black hearts pumping,

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5 comments:

An Honest Man said...

Much maligned little mice ;-)

Rachel Fox said...

No. it's uphill. I like this mucho.
x

Sorlil said...

honest man - as long as they're not in my house I love the little creatures, lol!

thanks rachel, I'm glad you like it.

Roxana said...

this is very good. intense and concentrated. the ending is fabulous.

Sorlil said...

thankyou, I'm very glad you like it!