Saturday, April 18, 2009

In a bid to catch up I've cheated slightly and reworked some of my old discarded poems to see if I can get anything worth keeping out of them.

NaPoWriMo 15


Your homes are carved

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NaPoWriMO 16

Chance Meeting

I dreamt we would meet
by the Danube at night.

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ambersun said...

Loved the first poem particularly - sounded like some sort of market. Lots of colour etc.

All the best


Roxana said...

you don't write love poetry often, but i love it when you do, it is so delicate and fresh. the only line that doesn't resonate in me is the moon like a clock face. the rest is exquisite.

Sorlil said...

thanks amber, I'm glad you like it, yes it was very much market-like.

hi roxana, thankyou, that's a great help, when I've held onto a piece for so long it's hard to see what bits need to be chopped.